The risk assessment

Last week, Melissa and I have made this risk assessment but I forgot to upload it. Here is the Risk Assessment that we made:

Risk Assessment Form – Part A

Production Name:	Revenge	Organisation
Production Address:	Ellesmere	Producer / Editor  Tel: Mobile:	Melissa, Gigi - -
Start date	07/02/2018	End date	05/03/2018
Distribution Who gets a copy of the assessment	Melissa Fu, Gigi Zhang
Outline of risk assessment Summary of what is proposed in terms of sequences and set ups.	Multiple scenes of walking through streets, scenes of ‘homeless child’ sitting down on the street, scenes in the bar, scenes in the chapel
Team members / experts / contractors / contributors etc. List those involved	Melissa Fu, Gigi Zhang
Locations Outline locations involved – indicate any which are hostile environments	Ellesmere
Assessor  Name Signature		Date completed
Authoriser Name (if not Assessor) Signature		Date authorised

Hazard list – select your hazards from the list below and use these to complete Part B
Situational hazards	Tick	Physical / chemical hazards	Tick	Health hazards	Tick
Assault by person	X	Contact with cold liquid / vapour		Disease causative agent
Attack by animal		Contact with cold surface	X	Infection
Breathing compressed gas		Contact with hot liquid / vapour		Allergic reaction
Cold environment	X	Contact with hot surface		Lack of food / water
Crush by load		Electric shock		Lack of oxygen
Drowning		Explosive blast		Physical fatigue	X
Entanglement in moving machinery		Explosive release of stored pressure		Repetitive action
High atmospheric pressure		Fire		Static body posture
Hot environment		Hazardous substance		Stress / anxiety	X
Manual handling		Ionizing radiation		Venom poisoning
Object falling, moving or flying		Laser light
Obstruction / exposed feature	X	Lightning strike		Environmental hazards
Sharp object / material		Noise		Litter
Shot by firearm		Non-ionizing radiation		Nuisance noise / vibration	X
Slippery surface	X	Stroboscopic light		Physical damage
Trap in moving machinery		Vibration		Waste substance released into air
Trip hazard				Waste substance released into soil / water
Vehicle impact / collision		Managerial / organisational hazards
Falls from height		Management factors  (lack of communication, co-operation, co-ordination and competence)

Risk matrix – use this to determine risk for each hazard i.e. ‘how bad and how likely’	Likelihood of Harm
Severity of Harm	Remote e.g. <1 in 1000 chance	Very unlikely e.g. 1 in 200 chance	Unlikely e.g. 1 in 50 chance	Possible  e.g. 1 in 10 chance	Likely e.g. >1 in 3 chance
Negligible  e.g. small bruise	Trivial	Trivial	Trivial	Low	Low
Slight  e.g. small cut, deep bruise	Trivial	Trivial	Low	Low	Medium
Moderate  e.g. deep cut, torn muscle	Trivial	Low	Medium	Medium	High
Severe  e.g. fracture, loss of consciousness	Low	Medium	High	High	Extremely high
Very Severe e.g. death, permanent disability	Low	Medium	High	Extremely high	Extremely high

Risk Assessment Form – Part B

Continue on separate sheet if necessary

1 – complete separate table for each activity     2 - from hazard list in Part A     3 - from risk matrix in Part A

Activity1 – Each individual activity you are proposing:			Location – where this activity will take place:	Dates / times:
Hazards2 List what could cause harm from this activity  e.g. falls from height, trip hazard, fire, etc.	Who exposed List who might be harmed from this activity e.g. staff, contractors, contributors, public, etc.	Risk3 For each hazard, decide level of risk as if you were to do the activity without your controls	Control measures For each hazard, list the measures you will be taking to minimise the risk identified e.g. appointing competent persons, training received, planning and rehearsals, use of personal protective equipment, provision of first aid, etc.	Risk3 For each hazard, decide level of risk once all your controls are in place
Assault by person	ALL	Remote - Very Severe	Avoid arguments with any members of the public. Prepare the first-aid kit	Remote - slight
Cold environment	ALL	Possible - severe	Warm clothing will be advised to be worn when the actors are not acting. If an actor is extreme cold, we will consider to film the scene in a warmer day which this actor has involved in	N/a
Slippery surface	ALL	Possible - negligible	Skid shoes or stout footwear is advised where possible. When walking outside, walk slowly and care should be made by all actors	Remote-negligible
Contact with cold surface	Homeless actor	Remote - negligible	Actor must ensure that he is warm enough and he avoids touching any cold surfaces	Remote - negligible
Nuisance noise/vibration	ALL	Very unlikely - moderate	Keep the filming place at least 5 meters away from the noise	N/a
Physical fatigue	Actors and actresses	Remote - very severe	Medicine should be brought and a phone should be brought to ensure support can be requested if needed	N/a
Stress/anxiety	Actors and actresses	Remote - negligible	Stop filming and take a rest if the actor is stressful, talk to him and make him calm down	Remote - very severe

The finale script

After we gave our script teacher and she gave back us of the feedback, we changed a lot and this may be our finale script:

REVENGE

------by Cynthia，Gigi and Melissa

FADE IN:

EXT. A DARK ALLEY-RAINY NIGHT

A very common alley, dirty and dim. There was one street lamp shining beside the entrance of the lane illuminating a big bin stuffed with trash. A big shadow in cast in the alley. Audience can see something hiding in the dark but can't see clearly. 

The sound of filling bullets in a car-triage can be heard, clear, slow and rhythmic……(continue)

CUT TO:

THE SHADOW FILLED ALLEY

ALLEN, a 22-year-old killer, tall but not muscular, leaning on the wall filling his magazine. He was wearing a black coat and black hat, can’t see his face clearly. He finished filling and loaded his handgun, walks out the alley.(sound stop).

CUT TO:

EXT. STREET-RAINY NIGHT

A homeless boy curled up in his blanket on the pavement.

Allen walks by and stops, takes out his wallet, took out an old cross necklace which seemed to belong to a woman and puts it into his pocket. Then he gives his wallet to the boy.

A  HOMELESS BOY, around 11~13, looks up and takes over the wallet.

BOY

(Pleasantly surprised and a bit confused)

Thank you very much sir! May God bless you!

Allen gazes at the boy in silence for a moment, then bowed and touched boy's hair.

ALLEN

(Gentle and a bit sorrowful)

May God bless you too.

Allen leaves and walks away along the late night street with no people.

DISSOLVE TO:

INT. PRIESTESS BAR-A COVERT PARLR-NIGHT

Two cups of colorful cocktail are placed on the table. The one before Cassandra was almost over, the one before Allen was barely touched. Light was soft yellow and the music of bar could be heard indistinctly.

CASSANDRA, a famous hacker and also a gorgeous blonde beauty, wearing a poppy in her hair, was a bit stunned by what she heard. A smile disappeared from her face.

CASSANDRA

You must be kidding, darling.

Allen stayed in silent, shaking his glass gently.

CASSANDRA

He is your foster father.

ALLEN

Yes.

CASSANDRA

And you want him dead.

ALLEN

Yes.

CASSANDRA

You are insane.

ALLEN

I know that.

(A long period of silence.)

CASSANDRA

(Speak suddenly)

Did I tell you insanity is my favorite?

Allen still not say anything, but he stops shaking the glass.

CASSANDRA

(Lied back, smiled)

Tell me, what do you want, sweetheart? 

She picks up the glass and drinks the last drop of cocktail.

CASSANDRA

How about, the control of Raven Manor's security system?

Allen looks up, his eyes looking at Cassandra’s eyes, Cassandra just replies a smile to him. 

ALLEN(v.o.)(CONT'D)

Sometimes the past is more stubborn than you think.No matter how far you run, how fast you can be, it can always catch you. Like a snake, like a shadow, like a ghost. 

My father was a dye-in-the-wood bastard. Since I can remember, the only time I would see him is when he come for money.

My mother was the one who gave me life, raised me, and built my happiness childhood. I still remember how she looked like in that lilac dress--- her favorite one, how she called me "my dearest boy" and the fragrance of her skin.

I had seen my father beat her. From that time, I swore I would protect her……however…

CUT IN:

BLACK SCREEN

Sound of gun shots.

DISSOLVE IN:

ALLEN'S HOUSE-LIVING ROOM-DUSK

Allen's mother's body was lying on the floor, she was tidied and eyes closed, adjusted to a serene position. Allen's father was lying not far away from her, face down and five bullets hole on his back, not tidied. Blood turned the carpet red.

ALLEN(v.o.) (COUNT.D)

Everything happened so fast, I didn't even realise what happened when I saw the blood. I was so stunned, which strangely make me calm. 

I walked past my father, saw his body, didn't feel anything inside. When I kneeled beside my mother, touched her hands-they were ice-cold, I suddenly realised one fact: I’d lost her, forever.

DISSOLVE TO:

CHURCH-PARENTS' FUNERAL-DAY

Allen was sitting on a chair in corner, guests were talking to each other quietly.

GUESTA/B, Guests invited to join the funeral.

GUEST A

I heard they were murdered by mafioso.

GUEST B 

Is that for real?

GUEST A

His father stole their goods and......

GUEST B

Shhhhh! The boy is looking at us!

Guest B walked to Allen.

GUEST B

Be strong, my child. We will be with you.

Guest B tried to touch Allen's hair, but he pushed her and ran away.

CUT TO:

CHURCH-BENCH NEAR DOOR

Allen hid under the bench, after a while, he heard someone was talking and walked in.

PRIEST, the priest who directed the funeral. 

PRIEST

......when I found him, he was sleeping with his mother's body in blood. Until today, he still refuse to talk.....what a poor child!

Priest saw Allen under the bench.

PRIEST

Why you are here? Come out.

Priest turned to Syrus

PRIEST

Here is the child.

SYRUS, a professional killer, 29-years but looks two years younger than actual. Wearing camel coat and quadrille scarf. Mild and grateful.

Syrus crouched，looked deep into Allen's eyes and then took him out. He held Allen in arms.

SYRUS

(Smile)

Nice to meet you, little Allen.

ALLEN(v.o.)

I should appreciate him. He adopted me, looked after me, taught me well… 

Little Allen looks up to Syrus’s face, just like he seeking for the hope.

(PS: the highlight part is that we might film that part or maybe we will delate it. We still unsure that we might film that part therefore we highlight it.)